There are few grammatical mistakes and sentences are well written, you can enjoy a fairly good reading experience for the first twenty something chapters. The problem is that the author does not really know how fast Barry should be and makes it so that he is only an observer whose actions cause little to no changes to canon events.While his interactions with the avengers are interesting and his relationship with Wanda is a good point, Barry being transported to the MCU has only caused 1 change that could be major so far and it doesn't even change the narrative of the story in any meaningful way. I was willing to overlook that and kept on reading until the events of civil war started but when Barry who has been training with Steve and Natasha for about a year in close combat gets taken out easily by T'challa as if he wasn't supposed to be the fastest man alive, I could not go on. I understand that the CW's Flash was nerfed to the ground but I think that even that Flash would not be so weak against the opponents he is fighting after a year of cqc training under two really experienced combatants. All the best to the author, I have some of his other novels saved to start reading and hopefully those are better.
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A flash with next to no training should still dog walk the entirety of the civil war cast, did the author nerf the shit out of his abilities?
