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2024-10-28 02:29

Very interesting story and world building

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Transmigrated Into The True Heiress follows the journey of an assassin who finds herself transmigrated into the body of a timid, naive high school girl. Though supposedly the legitimate daughter of her household, she faces cruel treatment from her stepmother and sister. What I love most about this story is its smooth progression, free from irrelevant fillers or “commercial breaks.” Estrella keeps the storytelling focused and to the point. The writing style is descriptive and immersive, particularly during the action scenes, which are thrilling and will keep you on the edge of your seat. It’s evident that the author has done thorough research, as the narrative feels refined and well-edited. As for the characters, Eira didn’t resonate with me immediately, though I admire her feisty, strong-willed nature, which is well-portrayed. However, some scenes, like her encounter with Jania, felt somewhat irrelevant. Mira’s motivations for her cruelty have been explained, and Alan, well, he has a truly disgusting personality! The introduction of the male lead, Lyle, is interesting, though I haven’t caught up with all the updates yet. I’m curious to see more about his sudden possessive interest in Eira/Ephyra. Is he a werewolf or perhaps a supernatural being? And why has the AI system gone silent around him? There were a few moments of confusion with the interchangeable use of “Eira” and “Ephyra” to refer to the female lead. Overall, this is an intriguing and well-written piece. I highly recommend it—5 stars and a chef’s kiss! Looking forward to more updates.

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