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2024-10-11 12:47

It's okay I guess? Not bad, not great, just average. There are still some spelling and grammar errors but I can forgive that since it's a translation. One thing I'm not really liking is the Shirou here, specifically Miyuverse. He doesn't feel like him. Maybe I'm a bit biased since I've seen better characterization on another fanfic. I'm not exactly saying he's completely bad but UBW Shirou would've been a better pick

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darwin_smith
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What’s the other fanfic? Just curious

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Into the Night

darwin_smith:What’s the other fanfic? Just curious
darwin_smith
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Is it on webnovel or AO3 or smth else?

3RR0R_404:Into the Night
3RR0R_404
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ffnet

darwin_smith:Is it on webnovel or AO3 or smth else?
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