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Kelnok
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2024-09-14 16:31

The author is not a native English speaker and it shows in their work, it is very tedious to read due to having to stop and work out what the writer was trying to say. To the author I would say either write in your native language or find a English speaker and have them proof read.

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Vinsm0k3r
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well the story is still good thou

Vinsm0k3r
Vinsm0k3rLv4

not the usual blind loyal nobleman, everyone has desires not seen in other fics that willingly sacrifice their life for the order of their lord of the north

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