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HeavnlyImmortal
HeavnlyImmortalLv156mth
2024-09-18 10:41

Good story, but ive got some major complaints about how the story jumps around as if the author lost track of where he was when writing it, entire chapters seems to be missing sometimes, and whole sections of chapters are just repeats from the previous one.

Swallowed Star : Sign in to Become a God

zero_0224
4.3
167 Chs

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zero_0224
zero_0224Author

Hello everyone Author Here! I hope everyone is enjoying the novel. A great story in my opinion. I've worked hard to present this to you guys and made it readable as much as I can. The timing of releasing the chapter will be random as i will be busy doing my work. Do support this Fanfic.

6mth

ZYFULL
ZYFULLLv4

there seems to be chapters missing. Otherwise, the story has been good this far. I'm at chapter 14, by the way

6mth
CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

At chapter 41 I can say this is a nice fanfic, specially since I haven't seen any other Swallowed Star fanfics around. The translation is done quite good, however the translator sometimes makes mistakes in the Cultivation ranks and mix them up (calling the Thunder Dojo- Thunder Club, or calling the Warlord Rank - General Rank etc) and he also publish chapters in the wrong order. So what can you expect in this fanfic? The usual Chinese stuff. An MC with a worship/crush on the original MC (Luo Feng) and instead using his future knowledge to his advantage and become stronger - he leaves all the opportunities to Luo Feng, the author also doesn't remembering how strong he makes the MC (at chapter 16 the MC can punch 3,871 kg, and then at chapter 22 it's 1,600, this also repeat in chapter 33 and 40). Honestly the first 10 chapters were so good I was quite eager to continue reading, the System's Sign In was nice too, unfortunately everything started going downhill from chapter 11, and from chapter 30 it feels more like MTL... The System Sign In were also less frequent and less detailed. I believe that if the translator would have done some editing to fix those small mistakes it would have been a much more enjoyable read, unfortunately he didn't.

4mth
Daoistkc1w5i
Daoistkc1w5iLv11

Great story keep it up ....................................................................-..............-................-.........................

6mth
zen_garden
zen_gardenLv4

Great fanfic of Swallowed Star ✨. Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.

5mth
PhoenixNT
PhoenixNTLv12

uma tradução muito boa, de um donghua que eu vejo, Porém nunca sequer vi uma história sobre. essa é a primeira e vale apena. tem alguns erros normais. mas vale mesmo.

5mth
HekAnwdn_
HekAnwdn_Lv1

No começo, pensei que era mais uma das fanfics genéricas com vários capítulos de assuntos triviais, mas após o capítulo 20 ficou muito bom. Há poucas fanfic de SS, ainda mais nesta qualidade. Claro, há alguns erros aqui e ali, mas nada tão gritante quanto muitas por aí.

6mth
Kartik_Malwankar
Kartik_MalwankarLv1

Great novel and nice stories I like it as it my favourite novel..............................................................................................................

6mth
Daoist8gHvTd
Daoist8gHvTdLv1

I want to see Luo feng in other Universes As a servant at Fate Stay Night As a cultivator in DoupoCanqion, Douluo Dalu, and other universe in W40k

1mth
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