(Excuse my bad writing here) The most recent chapter has fully captured me. Maybe its because I’ve been on here for so long (about 6-7 years), so I’ve seen and read quite a bit. I can honestly say tho that I love this fic. Hers some of the reasons. Pros: 1. Pacing is amazing. It’s not rushe but it’s also not unbearably slow. 2. Dialogue isn’t stilted, they communicate like actual human beings. 3. The fact I can tell who is speaking. POV changes are clear ( the bar really is low if this is a pro btw) ( also this isn’t shade at this author it’s for the others) 4. Grammer I can’t tell because I read Mtl so literally anything would do at this point. Couldn’t come up with any more reasons to glaze the author 😂 Cons: 1. The fact that I found this fic so early. Thats my only problem. 2. The fic has a lot of potential. This is actually con for me, mainly because I’ve seen way to many authors have amazing ideas, with an amazing story but they get burnt out. I’d hate to see it happen but my heart has been broken way to many times for the me to keep my hopes up. Highly recommended after few more chapters tho to binge it all at once. So even if it gets dropped, I’ll still be happy. Thanks again for this wonderful work Gloryhunter
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LIKEA lot of the time tho, author will go into detail on the thoughts of the current POV. Don’t know others feel about it, but I love it. It fleshes out the character and adds more substance to them. Even for well established characters like coulson, I like hearing their thoughts.
yh great authors out here dropping 20 chapter bangers then on hiatus for 3 years then come back with an update chapter that they will continue the story but never do.
