Item: Fairy Tale: With Sin Of Pride
Rating: 3.8
Author: Umbasa

UmbasaLv1514d

2024-12-21 03:35

I'm a little miffed about 2 things the first is the you uploaded the same 2 chapters a couple of days ago and made no effort to correct it, the second is that you make no effort to get the names of abilities correctly even after I post the correct name of the ability, the book is fine for the most part but these 2 issues urge me to drop it entirely because it shows you don't care.

Fairy Tale: With Sin Of Pride

Immortal_Darkness_

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115 Chs

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Immortal_Darkness_Author

Well my exams were going on till yesterday. So i only put chaps on timer for mean time. Tho I'll try my best to correct the mistakes.

12d

Immortal_Darkness_Author

Bro can you tell me the mistakes in which chap they were done?

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UmbasaLv15

The two chapters that were repeated were chapters 85 and 86 as for the naming mistakes on abilities such as the commandment of Piety, Repose, Reticence, Pacifism, and others I can let them pass by seeing as I'm quite used to such things I just felt as if you didn't care mainly because you didn't fix the repeated uploads the story is solid nonetheless and I do enjoy it

Immortal_Darkness_:Bro can you tell me the mistakes in which chap they were done?

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Immortal_Darkness_Author

I'll check the repeat chaps mistake tho i can really do much about the names as previous TL quit and new is still green and also due to lack of patrons currently ! Tho I'll try to rectify the mistakes in the free time by myself

Umbasa:The two chapters that were repeated were chapters 85 and 86 as for the naming mistakes on abilities such as the commandment of Piety, Repose, Reticence, Pacifism, and others I can let them pass by seeing as I'm quite used to such things I just felt as if you didn't care mainly because you didn't fix the repeated uploads the story is solid nonetheless and I do enjoy it

11d

Immortal_Darkness_Author

Ok the repeat chaps mistake is now cleared and thanks for telling me this. only you point out the mistake rest just ignored it or didn't bothered to say to me.

11d

UmbasaLv15

All I can ask for really. thanks for taking the time, and I'm sorry for my somewhat excessive claim. I shouldn't have said you didn't care. I know you put some effort into this story

Immortal_Darkness_:I'll check the repeat chaps mistake tho i can really do much about the names as previous TL quit and new is still green and also due to lack of patrons currently ! Tho I'll try to rectify the mistakes in the free time by myself

11d

Immortal_Darkness_Author

No worries mate 🙂 I really appreciate that you informed me due to which I could Correct it. and MERRY CHRISTMAS ⛄🎁🎄🎊

Umbasa:All I can ask for really. thanks for taking the time, and I'm sorry for my somewhat excessive claim. I shouldn't have said you didn't care. I know you put some effort into this story

UmbasaLv15

Merry Christmas, my friend

Immortal_Darkness_:No worries mate 🙂 I really appreciate that you informed me due to which I could Correct it. and MERRY CHRISTMAS ⛄🎁🎄🎊

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