Not cold, calculating, indifferent, cool, mechanical, or emotionless enough. His indifferent, emotionless, and calculating eyes are too much like a normal person's eyes. Don't get me started on how not calculating, cool, and dark he is on the inside. 0/10, needs to drown more pigeons tbh. In case you didn't get the joke in my cold, indifferent, calculating, and cool opinion this story is a little repetitive with it's descriptors and is a bit too edgy for me while I'm sober.

I typed this review with slow deliberate moves, my cold calculating eyes flaring up as i knew the effectiveness that my review held, yet i showed no ounce of mercy as i rated it 5 stars, putting on a mask to hide my true opinions.

although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time

I already like it, the author, just don't rush Think about everything and do not be afraid to change the canon and let it be a slow pace in terms of romance and history

No cap its fire asf so far bro you should really finish this your cooking

sasuke or hinata or the both ? ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

i'm droping this fic. i don't even like the chapter 1. this fic is shit

here's the problem: 1. the amount of updates versus the amount of content per update means that it's honestly not worth waiting for. 2. The characters are extremely inconsistent; either have them be edgelords, or have them be genuine; you can't have both. 3. The reasoning of characters is mostly either horribly flawed, or not there to begin with. 4. Last but not least, please put any work through Grammarly or something similar, for the love of god; it's FREE and takes like 5 minutes to plug in a chapter and edit it. Fix these issues and a great work will be in your hands.

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