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2024-11-22 06:56

fast pace , well written , doesn't drag on and on , good read so far ! keep up the good work 👍

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story has a good premise. i like the newer idea of this landlord and building a shelter that only the mc can control and her recruiting other superpowered teammates. my bone to pick with however is the inconsistency with power levels. for ex, to begin with, it didn't really make sense for xu water guy to suddenly obtain level 10 with his water powers when he didn't have a breakthrough. he literally was just sitting in a bath (can't exactly remember but smth like that) and just shot up to lvl 10 without any fighting stimulus and after just obtaining his power recently and barely using his new powers at all. then the team has a battle with 2 monsters that are only at level 4-5 and yet it requires everyone (like 5 people) including water boy to fight them. it would've made more sense if his power was only at lvl 5 cuz how is a monster 6 LEVELS BELOW (not 1, not even 2 or 3) gonna "exhaust" his powers? usually, it's already difficult to level up because of the exponential power differences as stages increase so it doesn't make sense for him to be struggling to beat these 2 monsters at all and needing help as well. even if power elements clash just his lvl 10 should be insurmountable for the monsters to beat. if it's because he hasn't gotten used to his powers or isn't trained, then it never made sense for him to be at lvl 10 to begin with and lvl 5 would've made more sense. ofc if this story universe to begin with just has this setup of easily obtainable lvl 10 powers and them not being very different from level 4 powers, then ig that would explain it....?? 😪

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