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2025-01-02 12:06

I read a few chapters there’s no real character development idk who the MC actually is and the plot is more scattered then scarecrow brains. I’m lost in translation but not only that. Confused. I love the concept of the story super market. It could have been amazing with more fleshing out and atleast trying to make things just a bit more realistic. It kinda gives you a bunch of character types where used to but with no plot or anything. Too much too fast babyyyyyy my brain crashed out reading dizzz lol

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