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SourBug
SourBugLv135mth
2024-11-08 01:13

Great story line with minor grammar errors. Updating and cost is much higher than other similar books. As much I enjoy reading and want to continue that deters me from wanting to continue.

The Alpha's Fated Outcast: Rise Of The Moonsinger.

Ejiofor_Dorcas
4.5
309 Chs

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Ejiofor_Dorcas
Ejiofor_DorcasAuthor

Hi, thank you for reading so far. I truly appreciate. Are you talking about the privilege chapters or per chapter itself? Please I’d love your feedback so I can redeem it if I can.

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SourBug
SourBugLv13

Just the standard option of chapters. Most of the novels I’ve read only use 1FP or 10-12 coins. This novel requires 2FP or 20 coins. It keeps me from really going further.

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