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SourBugLv132mth
2024-11-07 17:13

Great story line with minor grammar errors. Updating and cost is much higher than other similar books. As much I enjoy reading and want to continue that deters me from wanting to continue.

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Ejiofor_DorcasAuthor

Hi, thank you for reading so far. I truly appreciate. Are you talking about the privilege chapters or per chapter itself? Please I’d love your feedback so I can redeem it if I can.

SourBug
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Just the standard option of chapters. Most of the novels I’ve read only use 1FP or 10-12 coins. This novel requires 2FP or 20 coins. It keeps me from really going further.

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