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Aprocrypha
AprocryphaLv16mth
2024-09-09 22:22

Acceptable plot good to pass Time need many improvements specially in Mc Personality

Dark Warlock in the Apocalypse

Harbinger_
4.8
234 Chs

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Harbinger_
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Thank you for your honest feedback i will be sure to make it 5 stars

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Hello . i am the author to be honest this i do a repost to my novel with some advanced chapters here i am gonna try Webnovel for few weeks and decide if its better than the other plateforms or not

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A highly recommended novel for you, no doubt you'll love it! 📚✨ The name of the novel: Clan Building: The Rise of the Feng Clan 🐉🏯 Chapters so far: 450 and still ongoing! 🔥🔥 Genre: Xianxia, Martial Arts, Kingdom Building, Clan Development ⚔️🌌 Check it out on Webnovel! 🌐📖

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CephalonCoda
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Okay, so while I stand by my previous review I did update it since the author/translator actually started making the story readable again after chapter 60ish. There is still way more errors than there should be, but in the interest of fairness I have updated my review. For those of you about to hit chapter 50, may god have mercy on you. With all that being said this is a very bleak but realistic story in my opinion, far more realistic than most apocalyptic novels. The story itself is very good despite the translation doing it zero favors. If its worth it to you to spend the coins, and you can push past the god awful chapters of 50-60 in terms of grammar, the story itself is worth it.

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