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Universe_Supreme
Universe_SupremeLv127mth
2024-09-11 07:11

This is just bad... Doesn't explain anything, the character interactions are weird with a lot of characters not even acting how they really would

Game of Thrones: Lyonel Baratheon

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BobbieBinz
BobbieBinzLv4

Ai written drivel with no continuity or effort into making it a cohesive story.

7mth

W_D_3766
W_D_3766Lv14

the beginning so far is shit but hoping it grts better and will update review as the story continues

7mth
TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

World background gets 5 stars because it's GOT, however, this story is bland with no advance... I don't know if the author is a monotonous guy with no emotions but this whole book as of now feels empty, no emotions in conversations, no progress. I don't even know what MC is planning to do or is actually doing... I also believe this is AI generated fic because the lack of simpathy in the paragraphs, I can not feel the author's emotions through them which normally I do even when it's a chinese MTL fic, I can feel certai connection to the story, but this fic is a complete void so far...

7mth
Thumbiko_Mkhala
Thumbiko_MkhalaLv4

poorly written..the interaction are shitty all in all it's just really bad

7mth
the_gapman
the_gapmanLv13

Poorly written, no attractive story development

7mth
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

7mth
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