a pretty good novel but needs further development in the storyline and character development, other than that the rest is good..................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
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LIKEhmmm 10 worth a try , wrap it up i want to know
ProgressingDaily:This is just the begining my friend, how can I give you character development and depth in 10 chaps? Let the story ferment a little and then see... Hahaha... Regardless, thanks a lot for the review, really appreciate it.