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Silent_Killer_6981Lv11mth
2024-09-21 01:34

a pretty good novel but needs further development in the storyline and character development, other than that the rest is good..................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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This is just the begining my friend, how can I give you character development and depth in 10 chaps? Let the story ferment a little and then see... Hahaha... Regardless, thanks a lot for the review, really appreciate it.

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Silent_Killer_6981Lv1

hmmm 10 worth a try , wrap it up i want to know

ProgressingDaily:This is just the begining my friend, how can I give you character development and depth in 10 chaps? Let the story ferment a little and then see... Hahaha... Regardless, thanks a lot for the review, really appreciate it.
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Silent_Killer_6981:hmmm 10 worth a try , wrap it up i want to know
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