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suikofan
suikofanLv45mth
2024-10-29 16:01

Grammar and story structure are well done. But it barely counts as a story itself. Things happen, characters appear or disappear, no struggle for anything, and no one truly interacts with each other.

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SharK_IN_A_Chair
SharK_IN_A_ChairLv4

Yes its waaayyy to fast paced it like what who how??

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