I am an ordinary reader. I'm leaving the usual review. There are few chapters yet, only 28, so it is difficult to condemn for something and praise for something. To begin with, I will say that there are many types of villains, for example: a pervert villain, an avenger villain, a control villain, a villain unrecognized by society, a villain seeking eternity, an animal villain, a madman villain and so on. Here, as for me, the villain is a madman in its infancy and I like it. The system of government here is ordinary and I like it. The beauty is in simplicity! In general, I like everything, but the only thing that bothers me is the desire of the main character to kill the child of fate. As for me, a villain thrives only when there is a hero. It is the presence of a hero that shows all the greatness of a villain! Here, our MC, already in chapter 25+, "theoretically" becomes the strongest man on earth and is already considering plans to kill the hero. From MC's stories about his past, I can conclude that MC was at first a low-level villain before returning, but after several skirmishes died as a mid-level Villain, plus MC says that in the past he occupied the dungeon office and it was at this time that he first received a hat from the child of fate, which means their meeting should take place very soon. With his time reserve, current strength and knowledge of the future, I'm afraid that no story armor will help the child of fate survive the meeting with our MC. Except for this moment, I like everything so far. Good luck to the author!
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first of all thanks for the review. now comes explaining ur doubts. . . about mc's past life, yes he met the hero when he was occupying that dungeon and taking taxes from random guys who wanted to enter. hero grouped a few righteous camps and defeated him, causing him to run away. .this was how their fight started. . now after rebirth, yes he is strong, much strong as he stole overpowered equipment and skills very early on, unlike past life where he got them just before protagonist came, and had no time to upgrade them properly. . . now most important thing, challenge. so I've already hinted about it in chapter 28. that it's not gonna be easy killing the protagonist. it's not like those other villain novels where one protagonist dies and new one pops out, or one lucky guy dies every 50 chapters. where over time actually the villain start to feel like protagonist. it's not that type of story. . here protagonist is actually a really nice guy and a true hero. he's always protected by luck and his luck isn't idiotic like other novels where it'll decrease if you steal his opportunity that's not how it works. if someone is truly lucky, fate would simply give him new opportunity instead of doing nothing. that's what a true protagonist is,. .so Arthur here is just like that. . that's how things become challenging as my mc isn't actually fighting against hero, but against fate and world's will itself. . as I showed in tag mc will be overpowered, but there will always be challenge as he can't just kill a lucky one with pure strength. luck would find one way or another to interfere. so how damian tricks the hero, the fate and the world will while hiding his villain identity and still acting in shadows to stop protagonist from catching up to him is the crusk of the matter. and when these two really do come face to face, their battle will be legendary and so will the concenquences as every novel says but never acts upon. .. .(everyone says killing a son of luck will bring backlash and heavenly punishment but no novel has ever did it yet, I shall break that chain and truly bring heaven down to punish the mc for killing it's favorite child) was that a spoiler, I guess so. but will u forget it by the time we reach that level, yes. so does it matter, nope.