Item: Avatar: Martial Arts VS Bending (Avatar: Rise of Kyoshi)
Rating: 3.2
Author: Cameron_Henderson_0639

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2024-10-14 09:04

your trying to keep off the whole kill all the enemies that a lot of other stories do but the way you did it was way to fast and forced it was like he went instantly to that conclusion it would have been better for him to start it off like that now it just feels disappointing and honestly boring especially in the avatar world like he might be special because of his martial arts but his character won't feel unique and he is honestly boring and uninteresting

Avatar: Martial Arts VS Bending (Avatar: Rise of Kyoshi)

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