everything is good but the author did not give anything to mc and he is just like a side character in the initial arc so yeah i really don't like it and also flana is a type is a seal that connects or type of servant for the those and author had done that flana thing to literally every group members so i think at the end even if they become more powerful there power can be stripped of them if the god desire so yeah i really don't like this story so far

it's ok i think. My only problem was the MC was WEAK , i don't know about the upcoming chapters but for now the MC was the weakest from there group. he doesn't even have a simple privilege being admin. even if thier mission finish i`m sure he'll have the most lowest point for being the weakist. im sorry for my rants but for now that's what im seing from the direction of the chapter. ill change my rating if the mc improve from being the weakest. ✌ ✌

overall pretty mid. bearly any good development. had me like...

I like it. although I would prefer if mc focuses on becomes a little bit stronger but we are at chap 15 only so I will just hope he becomes stronger. anyway It's decent.

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If it is a creation of the author, include the world of Clannad as well. It would be cool. I've never found a fanfic where the MC is with Nagisa T>T and it continues. Good work. I've already added the fanfic to my favorites. I'll wait for more chapters.

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