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Silence1102
Silence1102Lv37mth
2024-09-27 09:47

The character design sucks as hell like bro went from full of hatred on dragons and then less then a day later decides to serve Irene and some fighting but regrets it and also a beta like bro is a tribad of demon, dragon, and phoenix yet so weak, demons, dragons and phoenixes are prideful so they wouldn’t serve someone so easily and if someone were to be part phoenix, demon and dragon they wouldn’t be so weak.

Fairy Tail: Natsu Twin Brother

itachi1010
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35 Chs

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Silence1102
Silence1102Lv3

Basically the protagonist reason of living is serving Irene which is basically a slave

7mth
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XmL
XmLLv10

The MC's name is a little strange in the world of Fairy Tail, it's not horrible but it doesn't really fit, it's not an extreme case of “Jack Uchiha” but it's still strange.

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CLOX
CLOXLv4

so far this story draws my attention in a great way I'm looking forward to more and don't drop it that shit is annoying when something good goes bad or is abandoned

8mth
Vinsm0k3r
Vinsm0k3rLv4

Spineless mc that doesn't live in reality, showing guilt and mercy to the enemies...

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Newports
NewportsLv4

Reveal spoiler

7mth
SonDio
SonDioLv4

Good idea that requires support, also, finally there is no harem haha

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CLOX
CLOXLv4

you should add the fairy tail tag if possible so you can see how well your story is liked compared to the other fairy tail story, you have received 200 power stones to this story yet it's very itchy when it's say 200 stone 200+

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Muzakar7
Muzakar7Lv4

Reveal spoiler

7mth
_KON
_KONLv13

[SPOILERS] Just didn't feel like checking the box. [IMO Warning!!!] This just my opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. It'd be easier to just read it and develop an opinion on it yourself. [RANT START] So... it ain't great. It started out weird and then just got bad later. Not because of this "hE ShOws MErcY tO THe EnEMy boo hoo..." nonsense. Everyone is different. He wants to show remorse over murder? That is fine. After all, I think one thing this story did well until later on was Ryu's character development. I say that cause now he just isn't interesting. God like MC's never are. No... The problem I got with this is it just feels like a beginning and an end was planned, but everything in between wasn't. Maybe certain events were. Perhaps it was just the pacing, but nothing connected. Everything was too messy. Evident by the amount of times the author had to leave notes, explaining things. Even if the explanations didn't help and sometimes just made things wore. Don't even get me started on the "Phoenix Slayer" stuff. One minute he can do this, the next he can't do that for some nonsensical reason. It was too inconsistent. I was not liking how notes would pop up. (Oh just so you know, he can't do "this" anymore.) Instant eye roll, bro. Now the characters. I could not even force myself to care about the other characters beside Ryu and Irene. The best part about this story is, no doubt, Ryu x Irene. Speaking of... I don't know if it was like this for others, but for me, Ryu getting together with "Erza" just wasn't a good idea. I didn't sit through all that development, waiting for him and Irene to get together just for you to to put him with someone he had so very little development with shown. Someone with so little of a presence to the story. Someone I wouldn't have cared for if she had been killed off in that group of people that did. Well, anyway. In conclusion... It's a decent read up until the chapter where he gets killed by the gods. To me. Like I said, because of how its written, I didn't care for anyone but Ryu and Irene. Unfortunately, one dies. The other does too before coming back to become SCP 001: The Scarlet King, and marries a side character. Some things, I just did not come to read this story for. [END]

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NamelessK1ng
NamelessK1ngLv4

I really like the story and hope u will continue it soon

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