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2024-10-12 12:10

great book interesting and fun nice to see a fantasy novel with a female mc only cretic is id like a little romance down the line but not necessarily your story keep coming strong

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Catlove12Fish
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Thank you for reading and commenting—it’s the greatest motivation for me. Wishing you a wonderful day! Oh, and I've decided to boost your luck by +10![img=proud]

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Auri_Kvothe
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I don't often write reviews, unless I either love the book, or it has some irreconcilable flaw. This time is because I love the book. I like to say before the spoilers section that this MC is one that I truly can understand and resonate with. Great on you Catlove12Fish for creating Rita. Spoilers ahead Lets start with the easiest thing to judge first which is writing/translation quality. -Translation has a lot of errors that are easy to overlook if you just use context clues. beings change gender quite often, and sometimes names. and skill names, don't get me started. but generally, 6/10 times it's easy to figure out what the author means. Stability of updates - I just caught up to ch. 481 so haven't experienced what the update schedule is like yet. I feel Story Development, Character Design and World Background all 3 can be combined. Rita is so far the smartest of all the reincarnation MC's I've read, and I've read quite a few. Her intelligence, caution, and scathing wit make for a delightful combination that leave me constantly surprised. Her willingness to steal from the old protagonist, whether stats, items, or opportunities, is amazing but she doesn't go over board with it. When given the chance to trade revenge for profit, after taking her pound of flesh(literally and not), profit trumps. Which is honestly the best part of her entire personality. The world itself is built beautifully though I'm still wondering if this is taking place in the US or some random world where the US and China have landmasses that have melded? Pangea is that you? The pacing of the story is also another beautiful part of this story. whether it's learning skills like alchemy or cooking, or one time was given a reward to train for 3weeks instantly, the story doesn't drag on. But just enough emphasis is placed that it's apparent these are critical parts of the story. I love that the time jumps are well maintained. but when it needs to get into the gritty of an Arc, the author doesn't mind taking the time to write out action scenes or just daily life of Rita and Nivalis. Overall I'll give this story 8/10 of the ones I've read. I plan to keep up and if my opinion changes later, I'll update.

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