Writing quality: 5/10 So basically, the quality of writing is pretty decent,, only not that great since the author is a beginner. The author overdescribes things a lot; even something unnecessary to the plot is described. I hope it gets better later on. Updates 10/10 - He atleast updates daily. Grammar 7/10: Decent but needs some more work, could use some clarity. Also, a, side note - The author should make shorter paragraphs since most of his paragraphs are long sometimes the flow is broken and doesn't feel engaging enough to keep reading Dialogs 6/10: Stop using filler words in every sentence. I can understand who is talking with the flow of the narration; I don't have to keep parrot that "she said" and "He said." The dialogs sometimes seem monotonous Story 7.5/10: It's a decent plot. It seems interesting, can be even better if the author improves it. It can be decent read if the author improves his writing in the long run. Definitely people interested give it shot before judging - Indian_Painter
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thanks for the review Indian painter.... will make improvements as I go.[img=recommend]
