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LordAizen4765
LordAizen4765Lv18mth
2024-09-02 13:17

Ahem, review time !! I like the way your novel is pacing and the character design, the story's worth reading, gonna keep an eye for updates, i will be impressed when the world background gets more exciting, so im gonna go with

RIZE - ver1.0

Adwit_ojha
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Adwit_ojha
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Hello dear readers, Author here. If you enjoy reading my work, please do comment and write a review about it. Please point out any mistakes. It would help me a lot to improvise myself. If my work brings a little refreshment to you, that would make me content

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ManInASuit231
ManInASuit231Lv1

I gotta tell you man, the concept of leveling down is novel. Never heard of it. First time got to see it. No bonus rewards from system, oh i like it so much. Keep posting im gonna give you stones power ones

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TimidTux
TimidTuxLv2

The First Book I’ve actually read through fully, I love where it’s going and think it’s a decently unique take, definitely adding to my collection and will be following this story. Of course I had to give 5 stars for a first review 🔥🙌🏻

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ANUPAM_DIXIT
ANUPAM_DIXITLv1

this is so fantastic,every thing in this nowel is just perfect and mind-blowing

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OldestDream1805
OldestDream1805Lv1

I like the way your story is pacing, its the first ever fantasy one I have read which provides you with the reason of "another world". Looking forward for your next chapters!!

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Starless00
Starless00Lv3

The novel is good and a somewhat innovative idea that you can try, especially for the virtual reality eraser Although the story contains some strange details I think that this will be clarified as the story progresses

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Coolguy
CoolguyLv5

Despite being the same VR game genre we see a lot here, the ideas in the novel are unique especially the ability of level down and people trapped in the game with no exit. It's early so not much to say about the character development and the world design but what has been shown till now is very interesting. The MC does get a unique skill. The initial fights were simple as many abilities and other perks have not been unfolded yet. The inner dialogues of mc, few talks with fellow players are hinting at good character development. The dialogues are also novel giving a different taste. The emotions of his dead friend and their revenge driving mc gives inkling of many fights in the future. Hope the novel becomes more interesting.

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shreshth_chaurasia
shreshth_chaurasiaLv1

Well the story is great. I found the cover to be good and I liked the development. Though I would like you to change the names of the main character because it is not good. Also, idk how you are going to extend it to 3000 chapters because he story seems like it should be maximum 900 chapters, though that is for you to decide how to continue forward. Other than nthis though, it's fantastic.

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TalesCreative
TalesCreativeLv2

I really like how the turn of event going, it got a good paced to it. There still a lot room for development of character and I would like to see more of how the Mc deal with his upcoming problems

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