Item: RIZE - ver1.0
Rating: 4.4
Author: LordAizen4765

LordAizen4765Lv16mth

2024-09-02 05:17

Ahem, review time !! I like the way your novel is pacing and the character design, the story's worth reading, gonna keep an eye for updates, i will be impressed when the world background gets more exciting, so im gonna go with

RIZE - ver1.0

Adwit_ojha

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