Item: The Villa.
Rating: 5
Author: curtiss_baier

curtiss_baierLv23mth

2024-09-09 20:34

A very good opening. Creates a lot of suspense and it is intriguing enough to make me want to read on. It has some clever creepy and spooky moments. Well done，

The Villa.

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