wow,the horror stories on webnovel always put me down,but this one,omg,my mind is blown.

A very good opening. Creates a lot of suspense and it is intriguing enough to make me want to read on. It has some clever creepy and spooky moments. Well done，

Although horror usually isn't my go-to genre, I have to say, your novel completely drew me in! The way you crafted the atmosphere and developed the characters was captivating, and I found myself deeply invested in the story. It's rare for me to enjoy something in this genre, but you’ve really made it accessible and engaging. Truuuly, a wonderful and gripping read,,,, well written

It's not very often you find a story like this. The gorey imagery with elements of mystery is refreshing .

omgg, reading this while playing scary music hits different.

This is a SUPER interesting story! I know if I start reading past this point I will not be able to stop lol.

Good work! I enjoyed the way this story immediately created suspense by beginning right at the start of the overall action, rather than trying to set the scene, establish characters, etc. and then leading to the action proper. This immediately hooks the reader and makes them want to learn more about these people and what will happen to them. I also appreciate the way the story's word choices, employing many serious-sounding words such as "dilapidated", "indescribable", "spacious", and so on, create a somewhat formal tone that shows the deathly seriousness in which the characters find themselves. Many of the words are less commonly utilised in everyday speech, though still conceivably used (such as the words above). This underlines the story's serious tone, showing that the situation is serious indeed. However, the words are never overly formal or "sophisticated", meaning the story is also easy to follow, therefore helping maintain the suspense mentioned above and allowing the reader to become fully gripped by this disturbing narrative.

I just loved he detailed dialogues and description!! 🖤🕳 The thriller is very appealing, loved it!! ><

This is great... love the Gothic tension given in the chapter.... keep up the Good work bro.

Dang, I really like this book. A bit of mystery and paranormal. And it's not cheesy or anything, it's something new and it's exciting and keeps you hooked. Definitely adding it to my favourites. Thank you for not killing Liu in the beginning, I love his friendship with Ning, especially Ning calling Liu Big Beard even when Liu already shaved his beard off.🙏🙏