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2024-10-25 01:30

Honestly the Writing is terrible with some basic stuff that is extremely annoying. And same for the boring Mc and even more so story Development. I expect much more from this author but honestly even some random novels from some amateur Writers/Authors have much better content then this. It feels like one of those Chinese novels where they take the Younger Generation to train but here the Mc is the side character that everyone forgets about if not for his father’s position. And the wjole Uounger generation and even the older generation fear the same tier/rank 1 Beast. In this case even those low quality Chinese Novel do a better job it especially considering the are born in that world and their mentality would not be that weak.

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*job at it

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Don't take this hate comment seriously? Why? Because. FailedRead, A.K.A Reviewed, Kurdiz123, Politician, Uprise, Arises, Auntilz, Dont_Try_Me Is a mentally and psychologically challenged individual who sometimes talks to his own alts and is a prolific hater on every webnovel he comes across. He thinks he's the next sherlock holmes. but on all his alts he uses the same phrases like Mor0n Braindeath and Fck you author. I hope you are rabed in your arsebhole. It's really not hard to understand it's the same guy when you see the same pattern of hating on all accounts.

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As an Author and also a Reader of Adui's works, I'll leave my honest review here about what I think of the story so far. To be honest, it feels kind of dull and soulless, like the characters are puppets in a puppet show, the setting also feels kind of dry, and you've failed at making an atmosphere that is believable. Adui I think you should stop thinking about your infinite mana story while writing new stories, you have to start from zero and build something from zero, this clearly feels like it's very inspired by that world, or perhaps it even takes place in it. Even the dialogue of the main character is strange, why does he talks like that? Its as if he knows he's the main character of a novel, which only makes the entire setting more ironic and strange. The ideas are good I think, but the execution is rather poor for the first chapter. Like this you won't be able to attract that many new readers, and only those from Infinite Mana will show up. I think this story has some potential but it needs more "life" and "soul" to it, do you get it? The beginning of Infinite Mana had all of that, the main character was grounded, an underdog, and it felt like that because his thoughts were relatable and those of a normal person until he started getting more powerful. I think you need to start from there and then go up, develop the characters personalities, emotions, dreams, hopes, and what they want to achieve. This story, quite honestly, feels more like a concept where a story was written around it, rather than a proper story that showcases a concept.

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