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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor6mth
2024-08-30 12:55

Usually, they'd always start with a shameless review, mine isn't a shameless review. I'm rating a five star cause of the energy and strength I'm pouring into this work. I've written a novel previously, but then, I lacked the necessary skills to push it to great heights. I'm still reluctant to give up on it though, lol. This novel isn't the best if it's kind, and it's awfully slow paced. This is because of how careful I'm trying to be, and also because of the delicate world plot. I can't rush it, but it gets better. That's a promise. But if you aren't the type that read slow paced books, well...*sigh* At least just give it a try. Those that'll support this work, thanks in advance. I'm still an upcoming author, so please bear with me. Errors can't be avoided. I'm human, but if you do notice any, let me know, I'll change it immediately. Arigato gozaimasu ʘ⁠‿⁠ʘ

Legendary sword Emperor

The_Broken_Author
4.6
89 Chs

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theSeekerLv3

harem?

5mth
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

I'm yet to decide, if it's going to be a harem or not

theSeeker:harem?
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theSeekerLv3

I hope you decide as quickly as possible because I am a non-harem reader.

The_Broken_Author:I'm yet to decide, if it's going to be a harem or not
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

I'm not really planning a harem. if i am then it will be in the later chapters around 1000 or so...

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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

this is a non-harem novel

theSeeker:I hope you decide as quickly as possible because I am a non-harem reader.
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theSeekerLv3

so you finally decided. thank you.

The_Broken_Author:this is a non-harem novel
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

thank you as well

theSeeker:so you finally decided. thank you.
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theSeekerLv3

✌️

The_Broken_Author:thank you as well
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

i hope you enjoy the book. The beginning is a bit sketchy. But please bear with me

theSeeker:✌️
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theSeekerLv3

honestly I haven't started yet this story 😁😁😅😅 there's still few other novels i am reading , Don't worry as long as this novel is in my library I am going to read this.

The_Broken_Author:i hope you enjoy the book. The beginning is a bit sketchy. But please bear with me
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

Bro, we've literally turned the comment section to a chatting spot. Lol. I don't mind, Thanks a lot for adding to ur library

theSeeker:honestly I haven't started yet this story 😁😁😅😅 there's still few other novels i am reading , Don't worry as long as this novel is in my library I am going to read this.
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theSeekerLv3

✌️

The_Broken_Author:Bro, we've literally turned the comment section to a chatting spot. Lol. I don't mind, Thanks a lot for adding to ur library
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AeonAeonLv13

Is it confirmed that it's gonna be single FL till the end and not like having a harem after 1000 chs as you said in your previous reply

The_Broken_Author:this is a non-harem novel
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

I don't want to give a spoiler. So I'll answer the question directly without explaining. Yes, it's one FL till the end.

AeonAeon:Is it confirmed that it's gonna be single FL till the end and not like having a harem after 1000 chs as you said in your previous reply
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

thanks for reading. I love interactive readers. It motivates me to keep writing. Thanks for the support!!

AeonAeon:Is it confirmed that it's gonna be single FL till the end and not like having a harem after 1000 chs as you said in your previous reply
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Ashborn1609Lv4

The_Broken_Author:I don't want to give a spoiler. So I'll answer the question directly without explaining. Yes, it's one FL till the end.
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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

firstly, thanks for adding to your reading list, despite the fact that the novel isn't so good at the get go. secondly, I'm grateful for your comments. Thirdly, thanks for making out time to read. I'll do my best to keep constant update. Arigato

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The_Broken_AuthorAuthor

Okay to all me new readers and old as well. The novel isn't really good at the start, due to my inexperience, but bear with me till chapter 30. Things will get better. Privileged chapters will be available soon. All those who wish to support the author, please do. I'll be really grateful. And there's going to be extra chapters based on novel performance weekly. 500 powerstones - 3 extra chapters. 10 golden tickets- 5 extra chapters. 100 golden tickets- 10 extra chapters. All the chapters will come during that same week, but not necessarily the day when the goal is achieved. Ps: the system might change overtime. If there's any questions as regards the story, please leave comments under this review, and I'll get back as soon as I can.

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ThyGrimReaperLv2

The book is really cliff hanging I honestly recommend to anyone who dares to challenge it's suspense.

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void44Lv1

I can't believe I haven't given a review on this novel yet. First of all, you! yes you!. you who are reading this, pause and check this novel out. Don't just run off boy, i can see you. Check the novel out.

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BelieverOneLv2

Very nice. I had a little bit of trouble understanding the world background because it's the first time I'm reading something with such a unique world setting. The character design is also nice, not just the main character but the side characters too. Everything fits in top notch.

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musqit_deathstarLv13

The world background and writing quality aren't peak, but the novel progresses wonderfully well. Each chapter surprisingly hooking. It's slow paced, but the writer just has a way to make things turn out well. Give it a try. I bet you won't be disappointed. Been following up for quite sometime, and the author isn't letting out. It's an everyday 2 chapter update!!! I'm sticking to this one ◉⁠‿⁠◉

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CoolguyLv5

The starting was good with no cliffhangers, no bs, just a pure and detailed fight scene. Then the situation after death became shrowded in mystery and the aftermath of the battle and new situations of the kingdom are unfolding in a slow pace. The overall world development and the supporting characters are not developed this early yet the plot till now is hinting at some good and slow development. The writing quality is good with spoken dialogues, mental talks and narration flowing smoothly. Fight scene are also fine considering many abilities and fighting techniques have not been properly developed yet.

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JWB_KanteLv4

Great work author, keep it up and keep it going

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Kamon772Lv1

Rather interesting start to the story overall as their also seem to be a story with the story itself. Like how in the first chapter rather then starting off with the who seem to be the actual main character, you start off with someone else that seem like they are rather important to the plot and main character might have the strength to deal with them. However they were lacking the power to do so. Would be interesting to see a round two where the main character has both the strength and the power(I view strength kind of as a mere aspect of one's power)

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DreamReaperLv2

The start has a lot that needs to be changed. Especially the fight scenes. Character traits need fixing. A bit of dialogue from here and there. Slight issues were found up to chapters 2-6. Fatal issues were found in Chapter 1. The description of the world can't be pictured. It would be great if you add one as an auxiliary chapter. Overall, there's a lot that needs to be improved especially the traits and characteristics of the Main character.

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