1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have

MC doesn't know HP..he only knows LOTM...MC gets pass around beaten like a dog and get away by plot armor..this repeats throughout. if you're into MC's that gets beatdown then plot armor saves him..then this is for you. in short he did a ritual cause he wants to be isekied then he did just to suffer.

It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book

the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.

Review: Quality (3) | Stability (4) | Story Development (2) | Character Design (2) | World-Building (2) The first ten chapters were relatively enjoyable, with some writing flaws and an occasionally irritating protagonist, but it served as a decent casual read. Unfortunately, the story started to decline after that. I follow the "rule of three strikes” on bad stories, and this story hits all I. Forced Character Actions:The characters often feel contrived, with decisions made to serve the plot rather than develop naturally. II. Poor World Integration: The mix of settings between LOTM nd Harry Potter was mishandled. I would’ve preferred a clearer, more consistent world-building approach by stricking being HP or at least introducing the LOTM more gradually. III. Overly Forced Plot: The story's progression feels too artificial, with key events like the MC’s accidental encounters, a sudden death of a potential adoptive parent, and the mentor’s untimely demise all leading to an abrupt introduction of a lady who expected the MC’s arrival, has heard a prophecy involving him, and who is also apparently a High Sequence Beyonder. This was honestly the one that ticked me off the most. The rushed pacing really detracts from the narrative, and all the “hints” and “foreshadowing” are awkward and offer no sibstance to the story — far too superficial. A more effective approach would have been to gradually introduce some aspects of LOTM, rather than overwhelming the reader with them early on. In comparison, THE DIRECT INSPIRATIONS, Harry Potter and LOTM subtly build toward their prophecies over time, which creates a more engaging and immersive experience than this fanfic. Overall, while this story isn’t for me, it’s still an improvement over some other works, like that dawn awfull **** **** stupid Isekai Dimensional Cube novel (I hate that novel).

It's a good read, but it's marred by the protagonist and frequent errors in details such as continuity errors. The worldbuilding and stability of the updates are really good, but unfortunately it's all marred by a protagonist who starts out with negative intelligence in the first few chapters, literally betting his life and a likely fate worse than death to find out whether the world he was transmigrated to was or wasn't LoM by speaking the true names of various deities and beings to see if any would show up to kill or torture him. After that he continues with several acts of negative intelligence, although this finally improves around chapter 50 and his intelligence increases to 0. At some point he finally reaches below average intelligence and more or less stabilizes with some moments of peak intelligence or stupidity. So although I really liked a lot of things about this fic and intend to continue reading, I can't give it a rating higher than 3.4 due to the problem with the MC's intelligence and the continuity errors.

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Ok so I'll be honest here the Start may be a little bit rough since he doesn't have any knowledge about the HP verse and thinks he is in LOTM but it gets good from chapter 10 I haven't seen any grammatical errors or anything like that here and mc isn't someone that goes I'll become Ash and gotta catch them all type he is cautious and does things that is actually possible and doesn't become powerful in day 1 and the side characters aren't brainless idiots or anything like that So all In one I would say this is one of the best LOTM X HP fanfiction on this app So thank u author for this

in starting he knows about Harry Potter World and lord of mysteries but overtime shows he doesn't know about Harry Potter novel like he doesn't know Cerberus is hagrid pet but if read the novel he would know in starting few chapters with the black matriac he shared his knowledge of Harry Potter