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2024-09-12 23:14

Great plot. It has a good writing skills and the flow is great. Looking forward to what Judith would do to create her very own world. Good luck author. 馃憦馃憦

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Thank you do much 馃槶馃槶

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This is the author with the traditional shameless review 馃槄馃槄. Okay, well, of course I'd give my novel five stars, because it's literally one of the best novels you'll ever read, so I highly recommend you to check it out. What you should expect from this story is a very complex narrative with tons of action, geopolitics and character development. Lots and lots of character development. I don't know about a lot of people, but I love it when I get to see characters just be themselves, express themselves and talk every now and then. One of the reasons I was annoyed with the phenomenal Naruto(which I still love and is my favourite anime of all time mind you) was because it had so many incredible characters, but barely gave them any screen time. I plan to remedy this in my story, so if you're going to be joining these characters on their adventures, then you should prepare yourselves for lots of conversations and character moments. With all that being said, this story will still contain heavy action, because...well, who doesn't love action? And more than anything, I really love to write action sequences. This story will be a blend of at least five different cultures, from different countries, the main country being a fantastical version of ancient China, followed by America, Africa, Korea and lastly Russia. Russia will be one of the antagonistic countries because I really admire them and I see Russia as a powerful nation and a force to be reckoned with. So it only makes sense to make them the villains of my novel, but not all of them though. The politics in my world will be a unique one because they live on a planet-sized titan. People live on the arms, head, torso, legs and so on. The geology and ecosystem of each region is vastly different, so this is where the geopolitics comes in to play. The last thing I would like to talk about will be the main characters. This should have been the first聽 thing I talked about, but whatever. Before you delve into this incredible world, I just want to tell you that my characters, my heroes, will be that, heroes. They will be morally good characters who care about life and will always do what's right. BEFORE YOU START ROLLING YOUR EYES AND HIT ME WITH THAT VERY OLD LINE THAT: "Morally correct characters are boring" 馃檮馃檮馃檮 Then please don't. Morally correct characters are only boring when written by incompetent writers. Not to say that I'm better than any other writer, but I will strive to be and do my best to write interesting and complex morally correct characters that aren't boring or cliched. We used to grow up with characters like these and I love them, I don't know when all this morally grey nonsense became a thing, but I don't like it. And I won't be entertaining them as main characters in my story. Besides, there are already too many characters like that, and I'm already tired of them. Give my characters a chance and I know you'll love them. -------- Oh boy that was quite a lot, I didn't intend for this review to be this long(I think), but I felt everything I said to be necessary. I'm a very passionate writer and I will do my best to update this novel consistently. Please do give my book a chance and I promise you won't regret. Thank you for reading this far. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.

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