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Andrei_Sousa
Andrei_SousaLv15mth
2024-09-26 11:03

After reading up to chapter 98, I can say that I'm disappointed. The author made a choice later on about the MC's relationship, and two FMCs in particular, that I really didn't like. My expectations were really high, expecting an exciting encounter, but in the end... Anyway, overall it's well written, frequent updates. The only flaws are that it's a bit slow, since it's only been about 10 days in real life (I think?), and the MC isn't as bold as his simulation self, which ends up being very frustrating in certain situations. Therefore, I'm leaving the fic, I hope that in the near future he improves the MC, and that the story progresses in a more pleasant path and that it's a success.

Dual System in Daily World

SenatusTheta
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292 Chs

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SenatusTheta
SenatusThetaAuthor

Note: this is a translation! I quite enjoyed reading this fic and wanted to share it with people. I hope you guys enjoy it too! I am merely a translator translating this fic with a few edits to avoid poison and to make it easy to read.

6mth

DaoistxKrO6P
DaoistxKrO6PLv1

Another dogshit Chinese translation. You can see the translator getting more and more regarded as time goes on. Haven’t read single chapter but I read the first paragraph and wanted to stomp a Chinese skull onto a curb. 0/10 find something better to do with your time than read this dogshit

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Kronos_
Kronos_Lv13

A great story with its ups and downs, but with an interesting development

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Asura69s
Asura69sLv4

Full starts as Author bro has done op translation and the story is op to read 😄

6mth
_JackStorm_
_JackStorm_Lv4

Good old Zongman is always appreciated, especially if it's well traslated. Quality is good and update is also great! ---------------------------------------------------

6mth
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

It's surprisingly really good. At first I didn't read it because of the cover picture, thinking it was just smut. The concept is really interesting. It's great work and a great translation.

6mth
Tatsu_00000001
Tatsu_00000001Lv13

5 Stars for the time being because it hasn't become (Brainless Harem). .

6mth
absolue
absolueLv13

Really good ff, change from usual, can't wait to read the next chapters 😇🙏🏼

6mth
Easycall
EasycallLv4

from what I could tell this is basically just a schizo mc with a mental illness I love relatable characters here take my review

6mth
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