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Gr1m_R34p3r
Gr1m_R34p3rLv11mth
2024-10-19 05:27

It has potential. I’m not one to complain too much but I feel it’s necessary to bring a few things to light. He appears to be able to comfortably cast spells non stop despite being only 11. A talent boost is not enough to explain how easily he can cast new spells. Running into knocturn alley is guaranteed death or enslavement yet he feels overconfident like he can’t be hit even by surprise. Easily casting unforgettables and other spells without ministry notice even at home is questionable. Taking dark creatures to hogwarts without any control means is outright stupid. Enslaving dark wizards a few days into the magic world with limited power again stupid. I get that the system he has is pushing him down a dark wizard path but 5e way he embraces it to such extremities is ridiculous. This is what I think of off the top of my head. All of this comes before the train ride…

Harry Potter : This Wizard Wants To Improve Too Much

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Bored_reader027
Bored_reader027Author

It's only in the first few chaps that Mc acts rashly. And I think you didn't read the fic properly because MC got full mastery of unforgivable spells in the starting chapters making him able to use them easily.

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Bored_reader027
Bored_reader027Author

Heya! Translator of this work here with his shameless 5 star review. Ask me anything you want to know about this fiction here. - - - Yes, this is a Harem , there will be daily updates of at least 1 chapter per day.

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Angel0fStrings
Angel0fStringsLv1

Thanks for the traslation! While I'm usually not one to read a Harry Potter fanfiction due to the high number of trash ones around, I gave a try to this one and I have to say it was worth it. The quality of the tl is good and the update speed is also more than enough

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Boderic999
Boderic999Lv1

This is a decent time waster with a generic MC just grinding his system. However, I just couldn't continue past C49, when the MC started going full-on Chinese logic and torturing children in school. The writing quality and regularity of updates is v good though, so there's that I guess...

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_Rico_
_Rico_Lv4

Really good translation with easy to read text. The story is also good with MC who knows what he wants . Though there were some errors in translation but the author corrected it as soon as the error got pointed out,and that's also a plus point.

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LeonToralla
LeonTorallaLv14

For a Chinese fic, it's pretty good and entertaining. The translator has done an excellent job translating and fixing almost all the classic clichés of this type of fic. Other than that, it has the classic attributes of Chinese fics and well, I think it's okay compared to others. The protagonist is good, he develops well, the story goes slowly but I guess that ensures many chapters and the relationships between characters are also good. I recommend it to pass the time and for those who don't complain about every little thing.[img=recommend][img=update][img=More pls]

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Korkyros
KorkyrosLv1

Not a bad read but strange habits for naming that don't really fit the lore of harry potter. Also was odd to call a freight transport company and ocean-going company. Also a few inconsistencies that I commented on where I found them that shouldn't exist in a purely harry potter world.

3mth
Sohal_Ahmed_2001
Sohal_Ahmed_2001Lv4

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OneWound
OneWoundLv4

Super good book would definitely recommend it. The plot and all the characters are really defined. Keep up the good work author..................... ..

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adn53
adn53Lv1

It's OK. 10/10.

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