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2024-10-29 23:12

at the start the transltion is bad ans so is the story but as the story went the transltion became very very good and so is the story with very good charcter growth and cool world building really recommend

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Artem_Trey
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made it to 154 or somethinh. Started out decent, went south around the Monster arc, fucking hated that arc. The demon arc made sense the author foreshadowed everything set up stakes, gave a choice, i saw the MC's resolve, the fight was good, the rewards deserved. He recovers from his injuries, levels up and goes on a journey. Encounters two more disasters in quick succession after the plot literally says most of them are currently sealed. And this poor sod encounters three of them. then proceeds to get his ass whooped by it's minions, leaving me to wonder why he even bothered leveling up. Then somehow he just gets used to their atta KS and starts killing them. Then he dies ans his homies finish the fight for him. Gets resurerected outside the time prison, kinda wondering why beasts didn't just eat the the tree or fruits on it over the next 3 years that it took him to grow back a body. Or maybe it was 10 days and he was still in the time prison, i don't remember and honestly I don't care. And cat just finds him, coz he was right there. It was ass. He gets teleportation and almost died again, using it. And that's where i quit. The MC literally went from being a moderately decent survivalist/main character to a useless bum, who gets lucky in less than 30 chapters. He used to actually feel pain now he's just carving off body parts like it's no big deal and the plot chugs on, droning on and on about some bullshit i couldn't be bothered to read anymore. For the record I'm not much of a fan of eerie creepy supernatural bullshit, nightmares and whatnot, but i know the difference between a well written one and slop like this plus your dumbass forgot the most important thing, this isn't a supernatural world, it's a survival game, there's more to it than just nightmares. You wanna know what nightmare fuel is and this isn't even the most scary one, not even close but it's a good read, go read, "i am a scarecrow and the demon lord of terror". If that nigga existed in this reality, he'd straight up annihilate a fully formed monster. And I'm talking like mid level scarecrow, not his final form. Like around the time he gets his domain. Dude was scary.

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