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Concept_Supreme
Concept_SupremeLv127mth
2024-10-01 07:57

i don't have much to talk about but I really appreciate this novel when the novel revolves around the trials themselves and unity the author really thought about that and hinted that a single country is not the focus and made sure to show it unlike some novels where it was clearly indicated that you are fighting for the survival of your race and civilization but honestly the author ignored that by ma king the MC agree to a truly foolish to fault agreement (he made the guild name the n ame of the country ) the MC talks of supporting the civilization but what does he do he only supports his home country and he's a reincarnator slash transmigrator with the ability suitable for being a leader and giant if he makes an alliance for the whole world being so far ahead of others and providing suitable resources for the whole round growth of the world and that is if he provides resources for increasing the upper limit of the talented individuals of the race and I'm here after reading the headache inducing joke no one is against mc but one of his allies wanted to have him be the leader of an alliance for the civilization if he wanted no involvement in management that could be worked around by not making a vice president but making the limit for the members being executive's and team leaders with small policies aiming for centralised management and control with country involvement being minimum but just because one of his friends Is Army personnel and connected to the army and royalty and they're not even real friends just business friends as he supplies all the equipment they use and powerleved them he shelved the alliance and made it an outsider when he could have used the Guild alliance to draw in members from across the world even those Patriots asit would be an alliance and acceptance would be full without people thinking of competing with it but once the official guild of the country surfaced he was manipulated in an obvious way but he never truly thought about the consequences only thinking he was aiming for single person invincibility it has atleast a thousand + chapters and I'm at 200 but after that announcement I just dropped the novel even if it gets better i just saw something so off-putting about the novel I don't want to read for so long about supporting civilization and see announcements about the growth of the entire world with 1% of 8 billion humans being the only people to rely on to tide the growing disaster but throughout the world but the author does this kind of shit you telling me that a race is being represented by a small group of 5000 when you can have 50000 similar level Elite working together for a common goal but you made the guild name your country's name making the others lose the idea of joining just because they would feel like they are working for a country and not the race and civilization breaking the chance for one supreme alliance above the small guilds🤧 i just cry when I see authors go in that direction and that being their idea of a better civilization growth path sure my idea has issues as well but hey the strongest and most productive supported by the best the world has to offer vs the strongest and most productive supported by one of the top talent of their country has to offer even if they are fewer than what the world has as they only have 20 out of 200 000 talents i just hate protagonist controlled and not thinking more when they can process information a 100× faster than a computer and can be regarded as the hope of a civilization

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Concept_Supreme
Concept_SupremeLv12

and this is just me saying please keep up the good work and don't falsely accuse a country where it is not needed even with hints just be reasonable with your build up and plot direction above was just me venting my frustration with well executed stories becoming part of the meta

HOT_MONTAGE
HOT_MONTAGELv4

it's good to respect the country but not like these authors... if it's civilization war than it should be world rather than a country... what a let down 👎.. i thought name is catchy and the description of novel sounds fresh but what do I get...

Concept_Supreme:and this is just me saying please keep up the good work and don't falsely accuse a country where it is not needed even with hints just be reasonable with your build up and plot direction above was just me venting my frustration with well executed stories becoming part of the meta
Concept_Supreme
Concept_SupremeLv12

let's wait they can't always show one country right after all it's a civilization war and survival it would be great if even though the MC has the sovereign talent the comes a chosen one with another red mythical like "Mothers love lvl 1 mothers gift ; can give authority to any individuals over phenomena mothers authority ; a mother to the cosmos and beyond you are the successor to mother who created the realities and destroyed them you can nurture any existence and receive feedback based upon the achievement associated with the existence mothers ruling ; as a qualified mother rewards and punishments are required but being impartial and transparent on them is difficult the form they take Is based on the mother themselves note:as the mother is a novel reader and game developer the form the mothers power takes is based on the mothers preference {it became a system like those from games but with limited slots with the limit being 9 at lvl 1 and the authority taking the form of classes and being game like as the mother can turn normal people into players whose growth is 3 times harder than chosen ones but their growth and ability is reflected to the mother } if you don't get it read "infinite mana in the apocalypse " it has the best examples of power structures and their forms

HOT_MONTAGE:it's good to respect the country but not like these authors... if it's civilization war than it should be world rather than a country... what a let down 👎.. i thought name is catchy and the description of novel sounds fresh but what do I get...
Concept_Supreme
Concept_SupremeLv12

and the saviour and greatest contributor to civilization survival being the players and mother

Concept_Supreme:let's wait they can't always show one country right after all it's a civilization war and survival it would be great if even though the MC has the sovereign talent the comes a chosen one with another red mythical like "Mothers love lvl 1 mothers gift ; can give authority to any individuals over phenomena mothers authority ; a mother to the cosmos and beyond you are the successor to mother who created the realities and destroyed them you can nurture any existence and receive feedback based upon the achievement associated with the existence mothers ruling ; as a qualified mother rewards and punishments are required but being impartial and transparent on them is difficult the form they take Is based on the mother themselves note:as the mother is a novel reader and game developer the form the mothers power takes is based on the mothers preference {it became a system like those from games but with limited slots with the limit being 9 at lvl 1 and the authority taking the form of classes and being game like as the mother can turn normal people into players whose growth is 3 times harder than chosen ones but their growth and ability is reflected to the mother } if you don't get it read "infinite mana in the apocalypse " it has the best examples of power structures and their forms
QinnyBear
QinnyBearLv14

Trying to read this almost gave me a stroke but anyways all I can say is you are completely wrong and misrepresented what truly happens in the story, you’re view of it just shows you didn’t read very much of it

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