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devansh_bangaLv39d
2024-12-15 15:21

Man, the plot and background are ok. But could you please try to keep track of who's doing what? The character names randomly change, which disrupts the immersion. Please, improve this. Everything else is good. (Idk about the plot after 37 chapters, so I apologize if the plot turns bad later on as well)

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