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Madeeman
MadeemanLv104mth
2024-12-07 09:55

I love the novel, it’s engaging, but I feel like the main character could show more emotion. Right now, he come across as too stoic, almost like a stone. Adding layers to their personality, even subtle expressions of vulnerability or passion, could make him more relatable.

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Satyaketu_Patel
Satyaketu_PatelLv15

why are some chapters getting mixed up and then missing in between. please fix.

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