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Jemase
JemaseLv219d
2024-11-04 01:28

This story isn't very good. The plot is simplistic. The MC wants to protect his daughter and bad guys come at him from weak to strong while allowing him to get stronger. There is no reason the stronger foes don't come sooner. He beats lvl 1 foe then lvl 2,etc... He never uses his brain to delay his ennemies, he just goes with the flow and plot armour makes sure he is never in danger. The author tries to make us believe the MC thinks but he just bulldozers his ennemies, there is no finesse. He goes against ennemies without knowing their strength nor their background and by miracle he is always stronger. And the golden finger is too cheated. He gets 1 Dao fruit every year on his daughter's birthday. I stopped when he had 4 and the 4 were crazy powerful. I can't imagine when his daughter turns 20 years old. The characters are simple, you are either a good guy or a bad guy. The bad guys are bat shit crazy and people let them be crazy. The MC's wife is useless. She has no personality, no use whatsoever in tne story. MC does his thing and he doesn't confide in her. It takes too many chapters for her to cultivate even though she could. And finally, either the original or the translation is horrible. I'm not a native english speaker but I read many stories in english so I have a pretty good level in English. But very often I don't quite understand the author. The way the sentences are written is puzzling.

As a father, I just want to quietly watch you live a long life

Li Hongtian
4.6
275 Chs

Liked it!

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LucasMorn
LucasMornLv3

True. Plot is slow and simplistic. No surprise and we are able to guess what's going to happen next.

6d
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Objectively_Wrong
Objectively_WrongLv4

A Li Hongtian work so it should almost definitely be a cut above most trash novels. Good translation, maybe done by a real person? Though, this genre might not appeal to braindead action readers.

2mth

Amog_elang
Amog_elangLv4

So far, it is an enjoyable book to read and I can't wait for more. It has action, a protective father, a loving wife and an adorable daughter - a perfect combination.

2mth
SonDio
SonDioLv4

This is a good novel, it calms the soul and poisons it. It is certainly not for everyone, it has its touch and if you are here it is because you belong to a group of special readers.

1mth
SleepyLibrarian
SleepyLibrarianLv15

Reveal spoiler

20d
Overdrive_Titan
Overdrive_TitanLv4

a good novel good world background , character of MC is quite resonating, good thrill, well it is not some new conceptual novel, as I have already read a novel based on 4 daughters, but it is also different kind of ride upto some sense.story development is good, about one of the villains,he is forgotten without getting killed, that I felt some regret,but it's good that the villains are atleast getting killed. But sometimes too much focus on wood carving has been given, which feels that MC is limiting his abilities feels that he should dabble in different fields, well that was it.good work ...

1mth
GeneralDeFartos_L
GeneralDeFartos_LLv4

Review by chapter 32. Finally, something unique done right. A solid story of a transmigrator who became a father and obtained a gold finger, however, he never cared more about his power, the focus of the story never deviated from his love for his daughter. The dude never thought of getting a harem or making as many babies to become stronger. His purpose in life is to be there for his daughter and protect her. The title lives up to expectations. Highly recommended. MC has a loving wife and lovely daughter. No nonsense about harem or main character aura, he's just a father who loves his wife and daughter. The gold finger is satisfactory, it has the potential to be OP, but it needs the MC to work for it. It basically just gives the MC an opportunity and a skill, and it's up to the MC to power up. Also, getting one skill per year is perfect, the story doesn't become saturated with a million skills and author forgets them, no, this story is about quality skills that last throughout the story. the pacing is nice and doesn't bore you. The only downside are the lack of interactions; we don't connect with MC, we don't feel affection for his daughter, the novel just says that she's lovable and cute, but we don't feel because there are no meaningful interactions. The same goes for all characters. Even the MC is hard to connect with. All interactions just feel like they have a purpose but no substance. Thats' the only downside for now in my opinion.

10d
DaoistwLFEsJ
DaoistwLFEsJLv2

very good.........................................................................................................................................

25d
rghd03594
rghd03594Lv3

Good book ,update demand is too high, plz update ......................................................................................................

27d
Ahmed_Emad_9773
Ahmed_Emad_9773Lv3

continue uploading brother . it's a very interesting book ...................................................................................

27d
Marinoboi
MarinoboiLv14

Such an enjoyable read. Hidden gem of a story. I just hope the daughter wont become like that one from that one book where half the audience dropped after 20ish chapters because of her disgusting character.

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