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2024-10-08 00:17

A rather enjoyable read so far (for the free chapters). The main character is hard working with a happy attitude. No main issues with grammar and english, is it a translation? Small critic : sentences are too often too short with an overuse of the exclamation mark and some idioms seem asian (chinese?). I wish the interactions with the sheriff were handled better and that chance encounters will remain rare as they seem too forced by the author and remove agency from the main character. Same thing when people force the main character’s into a decision that seal his whole future and he happily agrees without taking the time to think about it or discuss it with his familly or more knowledgeable people about the consequences those choices entail to... especially when you just isekaied a few days ago into a completly different society. As most isekai, the previous life, familly, story, has no impact so far. I appreciate how the MC used his first sundays, it’s an exemple of agency and shows his character. Beside that, it’s a gpod start. Good luck author!

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