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Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv31mth
2024-10-12 19:11

Very good ff and have a very important question after reading till newest chapter will there be a FL like ishtar or someone from the familia or will he become great sage I would be happy if you could answer thx

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IdontHaveaName
IdontHaveaNameAuthor

Don't know yet. I don't plan ahead so I really don't know... Maybe? What do you what?

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*Want?

IdontHaveaName:Don't know yet. I don't plan ahead so I really don't know... Maybe? What do you what?
Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv3

A little harem like 2-3 girls not big öike pokemon a realistic one like rose the receptionist and 2 from ishtar familia would say haruhime bit she is a kid my man needs love or he will go insane to hell with the perk of the sage he does not even use magic often

IdontHaveaName:Don't know yet. I don't plan ahead so I really don't know... Maybe? What do you what?
Damian_Gold
Damian_GoldLv2

did he join a familia

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Nest0r
Nest0rLv4

Allow me to have some fun and speculate. *Ahem.* Not that long ago, I saw three ways the romance could go. 1) The craziest one would be with Freya. How the hell would that work? If she were to somehow be able to see his soul for whatever reason, and she got obsessed with him. If he were to somehow associate that love with what his father felt towards the protagonist's mother, it could, in some really, really strange way, come to be. That would open the way for some really weird things; after all, both of them working together would be a menace to society. But the appearance of Miquella and the last two chapters closed that gate. 2) Considering the protagonist's personality, I would say that his partner just might end up being Tione or Tiona. If Ais is 11 years old right now, then those two should be 12 years old. By romance, I mean one or two of them fall in love with him because he is strong, and after that, things end up like with Finn, but with possible development after some years. Doesn't sound that great, does it? Right now, I don't see many other options for a proper "romance." He might have some strength, but with a face from horror stories and a personality just as bad, he just might have a worse shot at romance than we all. Maybe, with the help of God and the system, he could end up with Kaguya or Tsubaki, but that's pretty much all we can hope for. Well, I think we should also hope, or rather pray, that he doesn't end up with an orc, Mamma Mia, or Ishtar. 3) The last possible thing is everyone's favorite: character development. To be honest, I don't even know if this route is possible here, so what I'm writing here is more of a "what if" scenario. After all, with his personality, I thought he would already be after four or five attempts to get reformed, but this story isn't following the classical anime DanMachi formula. Instead, it's set in a version where "dark" precedes the fantasy tag—a dark fantasy. If it were like usual, then maybe he would find a mother figure in Demeter and become more responsible, or at least get better at choosing acquaintances. With how everything is proceeding, his last chance at finding some genuine happiness and character development in the direction of moral justice is finding a good god who looks like his father. Something akin to a reverse Darth Vader plot twist.

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IdontHaveaName
IdontHaveaNameAuthor

Lol. Thanks for the ideas. Will keep them all in mind on the following chapter.

Nest0r:Allow me to have some fun and speculate. *Ahem.* Not that long ago, I saw three ways the romance could go. 1) The craziest one would be with Freya. How the hell would that work? If she were to somehow be able to see his soul for whatever reason, and she got obsessed with him. If he were to somehow associate that love with what his father felt towards the protagonist's mother, it could, in some really, really strange way, come to be. That would open the way for some really weird things; after all, both of them working together would be a menace to society. But the appearance of Miquella and the last two chapters closed that gate. 2) Considering the protagonist's personality, I would say that his partner just might end up being Tione or Tiona. If Ais is 11 years old right now, then those two should be 12 years old. By romance, I mean one or two of them fall in love with him because he is strong, and after that, things end up like with Finn, but with possible development after some years. Doesn't sound that great, does it? Right now, I don't see many other options for a proper "romance." He might have some strength, but with a face from horror stories and a personality just as bad, he just might have a worse shot at romance than we all. Maybe, with the help of God and the system, he could end up with Kaguya or Tsubaki, but that's pretty much all we can hope for. Well, I think we should also hope, or rather pray, that he doesn't end up with an orc, Mamma Mia, or Ishtar. 3) The last possible thing is everyone's favorite: character development. To be honest, I don't even know if this route is possible here, so what I'm writing here is more of a "what if" scenario. After all, with his personality, I thought he would already be after four or five attempts to get reformed, but this story isn't following the classical anime DanMachi formula. Instead, it's set in a version where "dark" precedes the fantasy tag—a dark fantasy. If it were like usual, then maybe he would find a mother figure in Demeter and become more responsible, or at least get better at choosing acquaintances. With how everything is proceeding, his last chance at finding some genuine happiness and character development in the direction of moral justice is finding a good god who looks like his father. Something akin to a reverse Darth Vader plot twist.
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Nest0r
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To be honest, for me, this fanfic is quite a unique work. Why? Because I haven't found anything that I would really appreciate there, and yet it is still good enough to continue reading. It's strongest side definitely lies in the humor. It also has quite nice fights; it is extremely well measured in strength proportions and isn't scared of bold ideas. About its uniqueness, it lies in terms of morality. It wouldn't be a lie to say that there is none. I mean, I wouldn't ever consider that those characters that appear could ever become main cast, but here we are. Even the protagonist's personality isn't that of a hero, antyhero, or anything you could ever expect. His personality feels as if he were born as a thug in Danmachi and later studied some math in our world, learned some of our culture, and went back to Danmachi. That also makes the story take many unconventional turns. That makes the story interesting, but sometimes the story is uncomfortable to read, yet even those moments are often laced with comedy. I would say that this story is quite grotesque. Often mixing comedy with dark humor. I certainly wouldn't recommend it to people weak mentally. I would like to complain about pacing though. Often it is all over the place: At first, the whole system stood as a quite hard-to-beat wall of text. I know it was necessary, but some fragments were hard to read, as if a professor took something quite easy yet decided to make that as hard to understand as possible. At first, fights were much more dynamic. And I know it's mostly because he had much easier enemies to deal with, but some present chapters are literally a fight to a fight to a fight. Often with additional POV change that makes it all even more tedious. That problem got even more obvious to me after the last chapter that literally made me happy because it slowed the tempo, even though I'm not a fan of the whole development—I don't like which characters the focus is on, I don't like the protagonist, and I don't even like his abilities, yet I am still here, standing on the edge of the cliff, with a beautiful view, but dirty pants because of the height.

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