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2024-11-14 10:32

what I like about this story is that world development is good but good in beginning with then when the he family and she can kill them but still doesn't I don't understand it when I like care for your family but still war is going on and the he family is fighting her residence focusing on war and a master says believe them should she leave them but still the danger to her and I am going to be a big problem in the future and there is so many between ml and FL I like you and ask the person in front of you like me the female lead keeps everything inside her mind and goes to search about it I mean that book so much so much so that she think so much but she just doesn't ask in the male lead same he doesn't confess he just think you know ask now what I go over arrogance of do you think that you are going knowing it you can read my I just don't understand it so many stories in which if there is a dangerous people the other female leads Tuesday more controls them but this female it in starting she did do control him and killed him but the sea family she did I think just for the plot the other is doing this I thought this is kind of a famous novel I really like the word building at first but when she didn't give the family just for the plot development other she didn't kill him and I read other messages that say that FL and ml have so many misunderstanding one to stop reading another said that this solve it and other misunderstanding pops up like ml or FL 28 like they can't live without misunderstanding 150 or 160 then the ml gets to know ml get to know that she likes him but but the big brother or something like that says the she doesn't like him but he doesn't ask you just assume it you think that you can see everything and assume it like he knows everything that he is so smart irritating things the book the world but I can't focus on it when basically because of this understanding I can't focus on the world development of the story I just keep thinking when other missing this stand they are going to solve it I think that I want to skip chapters and go to the end of it and see it this all the mission the standing or not confused confest that you like each other Amin what is this I really want to say something and I bring other someone else that who said that misunderstanding keep happening one get solved another pops up I mean it would be okay if there is small messenger standing like if you missing someone just question but no all mighty god that can no everything from small things and the observation is good but at the end she know that he is in good but I am getting this type of misunderstanding world building is good but I don't like this understanding why do we read now we read novel so that we can enjoy not get frustrated all that so I am going to stop reading is good but I would like to advice or say to the author that from next time don't create this my name is get boring and frustrated

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