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ArriaCross
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2024-08-23 13:50

Intriguing story line. The pace is quite fast, so we get to the interesting parts sooner. 6 chapters in and the ML is quite unlikeable. However, it would be interesting to read hpw he'll redeem himself and how he'll chase after the FL. I'm looking forward to how the story will develop. Finally, I want to congratulate AJZHEN for starting a new story. Wishing you good health, so that you can write more stories.

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Thank you my idol, my inspiration . I’m also happy that your back writing again and I’m so happy to see you number 1 again. I love you! ❤️🫡🫡🫡 respect.

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