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G_GedasLv153mth
2024-09-30 22:38

MC status are unstabele writen. In chapters status is lower than thay should be. MC copy cat skil is not clarified wit more details. In one chapter mc copy skull do one thing i another chapter do ather thinks withaut first thinks

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LordShady
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My Review of your review ⭐ It lacks critical description. it lacks depth. How do you expect me to tell you everything about the system in a few chaps??? It also lacks advice(s) on how to get better. lastly, It lacks proper grammar for me to understand. work on this, and stop displaying your unintelligible review(You might consider this as rude, but I'm Lord Shady for a reason)

Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

he has a point, you need to think more thoroughly about what ur writing dude

LordShady:My Review of your review ⭐ It lacks critical description. it lacks depth. How do you expect me to tell you everything about the system in a few chaps??? It also lacks advice(s) on how to get better. lastly, It lacks proper grammar for me to understand. work on this, and stop displaying your unintelligible review(You might consider this as rude, but I'm Lord Shady for a reason)
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