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2024-10-25 01:34

the story and the writing is good, but before you read this story, you need to know that it's a very slow and a very info dump ( 75% of chapter ). this it's a major default of this story, not for the building of the story but for the quality time of the reader. because the author want to explain the development of the mc but hidding his full power for his hidden agenda. you will read the over development of his allie. ( with all the chapter more than 60% of the writing it's monologue or explaination of trainning and development of his friends ). even in figthing, the monologue and explaination broke the hype of action. maybe this will change in the future when all the background and the base of the story will be writing. but you need to know that for this fanfiction you will read more about other perso than the mc

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Yeah, it changes in the middle of Vol 3

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