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Pedro_Casta
Pedro_CastaLv14mth
2024-09-03 05:18

The story is a little slow, for now I like it, but I Will wait a little bit for You to upload more chapters, I hope You don't stop and continue it.

SUPERBOY: THE STORY OF A NEW HERO

lightshade_mc
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29 Chs

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The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

Nice alt author

3mth
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

What’s even dumber is you didn’t even bother to click on a chapter since it says yet to read zero effort alt account 😂 saying stuff like that grammar could be better it’s your grammar

3mth
Other Reviews
Qsamabin
QsamabinLv4

I have one question can u plz give Superboy Tactile telekinesis that allowed him to simulate Superman, flying, and laser vision, and its more he can do.🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

3mth

eurocolombia_pili
eurocolombia_piliLv1

I'm looking forward to the story, the truth is that You have some grammar mistakes, but it's something that You should at least try to Fix,I'll keep watching You...

4mth
tactless91
tactless91Lv14

While the updates are a little slow for my taste (please author provide a time frame for updates so I don’t go mad waiting on this awesome story) this story so far is by far an interesting take on young justice and somewhat of a semi au based on how superboy escaped Cadmus. It’s very well written and seems more towards what real life might take on it as no scientists died in young justice but this story has a more realistic taste. Good work my friendly author ✍️.

3mth
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

2 of the reviews beneath are Authors Alt acounts that he made on the same day. The story is a 1 for 1 to young justice and the author doesn’t change anything at all even after 20 chapters and looks like nothing will come close to changing for another 10. I’m inclined to believe the author put in a prompt into AI for superboy and just rewrote it off of that since it’s almost identical to the actual story but slightly changed. Honestly I just hate authors who alt review themselves

3mth
toshisero
toshiseroLv4

its very hard to read, author really complicated simple things when he wants to add his thing to original but it made it worse. mc is unlikable and dissappointment. grammer is bad. you have to force yourself to read cause of grammer and unnecessary long and bad inner dialouge of mc and others

3mth
LPMJHB
LPMJHBLv2

Well the truth is that you need to change a lot of things, both in grammar and story, it's not bad but make more noticeable changes, this gets boring, I hope that by chapter 25 at the latest there will be changes, I'll be waiting until then, I trust it will improve.

3mth
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