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2024-08-19 16:24

I feel like this has huge potential to be an amazing novel. It's only been 5 chapters (as of writing) so it's hard to say how well the story will progress. So far, it's great. The dynamics between the MC and Morrigan aren't something you see every day.

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Ulgen
UlgenAuthor

Thank you😊😊

Evilwithin
EvilwithinLv4

Will jack be able to go to that world? Will he be powerful ?

Ulgen:Thank you😊😊
Ulgen
UlgenAuthor

When the time comes, things will change in both the Otome world and the real world.

Evilwithin:Will jack be able to go to that world? Will he be powerful ?
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

when is that gonna be ? at which chapter ? cuz ngl I'm bored

Ulgen:When the time comes, things will change in both the Otome world and the real world.
Ulgen
UlgenAuthor

There will be changes to the game world towards chapter 100. In the real world, at least chapter 200. I'm sorry, but I think it would be worse if the pace of the story suddenly accelerated.

Ashborn1609:when is that gonna be ? at which chapter ? cuz ngl I'm bored
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

no it's good . as long as ii know it's gonna change then I can Wait. iIwas bored cuz Mc was didn't even have human form yet but continue at your own pace . i don't want to read another rushed book

Ulgen:There will be changes to the game world towards chapter 100. In the real world, at least chapter 200. I'm sorry, but I think it would be worse if the pace of the story suddenly accelerated.
Ulgen
UlgenAuthor

👍

Ashborn1609:no it's good . as long as ii know it's gonna change then I can Wait. iIwas bored cuz Mc was didn't even have human form yet but continue at your own pace . i don't want to read another rushed book
Lyrina
LyrinaLv15

Oh nice. Does this mean the mc will have his abilities in the real world?

Ulgen:There will be changes to the game world towards chapter 100. In the real world, at least chapter 200. I'm sorry, but I think it would be worse if the pace of the story suddenly accelerated.
Ulgen
UlgenAuthor

yes

Lyrina:Oh nice. Does this mean the mc will have his abilities in the real world?
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Aether_10101
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After reading up to chapter 112, I must say there’s a clear improvement since chapter 37. The flaws I had pointed out earlier are gradually fading, which shows remarkable progress on the author’s part. I especially appreciated the more mature tone the story is taking, making it significantly more captivating and thrilling. The side plots are well-integrated, and the overall pacing is better managed, making the reading experience more fluid and immersive. That said, I noticed that the pacing is sometimes a bit too fast, which can give the impression of skimming over important events. Taking more time to delve into key moments could make the story even more impactful. However, there are still some areas that need attention. While the characters are gaining depth, they sometimes lack a unique spark that would make them truly memorable and loved . Regarding the protagonist, although their growth is noticeable, their traits still feel very human, making them seem less divine. This is understandable given their origins, but I hope to see a more marked transformation in the upcoming chapters. In summary, this story keeps getting better, and I’d like to congratulate the author on their work. That said, one word of caution: it would be a shame to get lost in the increasingly complex plot. Perhaps having a detailed plan would help maintain coherence and avoid losing focus. Lastly, a personal thought: I’m eagerly anticipating the arrival of romance! PS: I sincerely hope this novel won’t end up abandoned, as happens with many others. The potential here is great, and it would be a shame not to see this adventure come to a brilliant conclusion. Kudos again for this wonderful progress, and I’m looking forward to reading more!

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