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DiscardedLv48mth
2024-08-21 15:21

rational and relatable mc, reasonable and believable plot, hardwork and effort instead of cheat and nonsense power scaling. one of the rarest gem of a fic with thoughtfully written story

Konoha's Genius is a bit Ordinary?

SaintXI
4.5
280 Chs

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therealet
therealetLv4

It's good. Definitely has the potential to stand next to the most well-known Naruto self-insert fanfictions. I'm so glad the author doesn't have a fourth-grade reading level because finally we have a story with incredibly accurate character adaptations and an MC that has a nuanced and mature understanding of the kind of people these characters are. The MC is a compelling enough character with how he's mature, how he's not edgy, how he's rational, how he cares for people close to him, etc. If I had a problem with this story it's how it's almost like it's confused on what it should show to the reader and what it shouldn't, there are countless times where I wished some things were shown and some weren't, especially in regards to how much this series *tells* us the MC is doing a lot of grueling training behind the scenes, but not actually showing us, leaving the reader to feel like the MC's acquisition of skills sometimes isn't deserved despite how much he probably trained.

7mth

Rak
RakLv5

Give this fic a try. there is noticeable use of AI in writing but till now its good. MC is trying to stick to being human while knowing naruto world is world of bloodlines. We shall see in future how strong he gets...

8mth
Ravi_Shankar131103
Ravi_Shankar131103Lv4

raw??................................................................................................................................................................................

8mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

great enjoyable Naruto fic, but I'm disappointed for the lack of timeskips. Genius as MC may be, but physical enhancement regardless of a perfect fitness regime takes quite a long time. It just feels like his progress was rushed way too much.

6mth
ZHomeboy
ZHomeboyLv13

This story isn't that bad, actually very enjoyable, even. But, what's with the title? What's so ordinary about the MC? His talent is like kakashi and he is often compared to minato. So, what's the deal with it? Maybe it's because he doesn't have a cheat or "golden finger"... Or it's just a clickbait title... Would be cool if it is explained at least. Since it doesn't seem to fit that much. Peace.

7mth
GGB_GAMER
GGB_GAMERLv1

I like this fanfic, 20 chapters in and I'm hooked 🙏🏼

8mth
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

Really liked this fic keep up the great work 👍

8mth
Weaver007
Weaver007Lv14

This really has potential, definitely recommend it to anyone who's interested. We need more chapters 🙏

8mth
shadedgrove
shadedgroveLv14

Really enjoying the story so far. Keep up the great work

7mth
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