Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book
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Tô aqui pela cenas de sexo, então tô curioso... as cenas de sexo só aparecem quando o MC tá vendo?, tipo ele tá sempre lá ou o autor mostra mesmo sem ele lá?
There are a few early on but this is the revenge side and the author hasn’t been updating the corruption side for long and is taking their time I guess. It really sucks to me just cause it’s basically everything I thought of, mc getting new girls to replace the others, the goddess is going to be fcked in front of Leon in the future, og girls will most likely be left by mc and leave leon bcs the goddess will probably have Leon’s d get smaller, etc. It’s all so cookie cutter that it’s boring
Zero_8X:Tô aqui pela cenas de sexo, então tô curioso... as cenas de sexo só aparecem quando o MC tá vendo?, tipo ele tá sempre lá ou o autor mostra mesmo sem ele lá?
Valeu mano, só mais duas perguntas rápidas... primeiro as novas garotas do MC vão traí ele também?, segundo em qual capítulo ele começa a parar de se humilhar por essas garotas malditas e Leo?
BlazerRevolver:There are a few early on but this is the revenge side and the author hasn’t been updating the corruption side for long and is taking their time I guess. It really sucks to me just cause it’s basically everything I thought of, mc getting new girls to replace the others, the goddess is going to be fcked in front of Leon in the future, og girls will most likely be left by mc and leave leon bcs the goddess will probably have Leon’s d get smaller, etc. It’s all so cookie cutter that it’s boring
