Will try my best brother man I’ll just have to be careful to plan this out. Reading the last fic felt like I myself was just putting ideas out there to please others. That won’t happen this time.

I like your fanfics man, I liked how the previous one went and although the idea of ​​a rewrite seems unnecessary to me, it is your work and you know more about it than I do.

Maybe your right and other opinions got to me. But honestly I agree with some of them. The greens should’ve been introduced directly after the battle of RR. Also my timeline and the amount of time it took to get from one place to another was terrible as well. I honestly underestimated the dragons speed. I also hope to put chapters together that were apart, for example, why not have Corlys and Rhaena meet Zayne in the same chapter they spoke to the Reed in? Why didn’t Intro sara snow if I want her to be an integral part of my boy Alyns storu arc? No. I will change some things. I never thoight the fic or I was perfect. This is just my tryin to get a close as possible.

Just didn’t feel polished enough for me. I hope I’m doing it justice this time around bc the premise is really really cool