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2024-11-26 16:03

at the starting the stories is good but as a story progresses the main character just forgets his goal and everything and became a completely new version his personality changes and everything the heroines also becomes annoying as a story goes at first the character says he is not a simp but in reality he is so I will say like starting chapter are good but after like I guess the tower arc or 30 chapters the story becomes annoying, boring and the character fields so 2D they doesn't think just goes with the script like it doesn't feel alive at all

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