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CoolguyLv52mth
2024-09-08 17:05

Starting was op with a fancy fight by the overpowered mc but this is a tragic system novel with lots of tragedy. Suddenly, the new system comes and our poor mc is threatened and abducted. MC cries "I want to be with mommy" so sad to see this😥. And to top it off he's blackmailed by this beautiful and stunning goddess throwing all responsibility onto his claiming she bestowed this system to his family and he's the poor chosen sacrifice who has to help her if he wants to see his mommy. The worst of all we know nothing about the previous system which bares its neck from time to time in this new errortic.. I mean error system. The mc is continuously threatened with the system missions have to fight evil slimy monsters higher levelled than him. Thankfully, there's this cute and dumb slimy guy keeping our mc company in his tragic journey. There are lots and lots of missions for mc whether he likes it or not, poor guy. The goddess does shower her blessings to our mc. Jokes aside, this is a novel with potential as it has good writing, satisfactory character development, good plot flow. I just missed some jovial situation and some funny dialogues,

Infinite System Inheritor Return From The Abyss

NamhyeBlueMoon
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212 Chs

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