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Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv15mth
2024-10-26 06:04

La historia no está mal, está bien escrito, no hay muchos problemas en el guión, pero tengo una queja, que es la razón por la que me dejó caer la historia. Spoiler: La waifu, el autor fue inteligente, creo una linda waifu, era muy agradable, y luego la mata, además, fue de una forma muy poco emotiva no especial, en un momento estaba viva, y luego al otro murió, fue muy frustrante, incluso pensé en la idea, ya que el mc fue en enviado milenios al pasado, una vez que mc se recuperará y fuera de regreso a su tiempo original, que llegara justo antes de la muerte de la waifu, y la rescatará, pero mis súplicas no fueron escuchadas...

Reborn as Anakin

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need your stones.

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302
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I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists

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Legion_Hunter
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So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.

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GoldDragonMachina
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everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.

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Frishizen
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Reveal spoiler

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Daoist5CeysR
Daoist5CeysRLv3

very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.

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Aspen_White_8221
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Niroloc_X
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Lastima que deserción y todo iba tan bien, empezó con un desastre de escritura pero con una buena historia de fondo, despues se olvido de una heroina para que cuando por fin habíamos aceptado a la otra solo pasara eso sin ningun motivo asta en las peliculas hicieron un mejor trabajo dando pistas y un motivo logico por lo que se cambiaria la mentalidad del personaje para siempre y aqui nomas puf y lo que sigue enserio que lastima y que forma de arruinar una historia.

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