Great book, interesting premise konoha prosperity directly linked with mc ; if konoha is stable mc gets stronger if not he gets weaker. I really like this new approach plus hehe Hiruzen and his F4 gang was something I didn’t believe I would see in Naruto ff .
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LIKEWell seeing how there is talk of building a GOJO clan and a Harem tag… there should be “romance”, as for “lemons” based on a lack of rated 18 tag and no warning chapter titles… I don’t think it’s gonna be anything more then suggested lemons…
Thanks. Sometimes I’ve read fics that didn’t have the R-18, but had lots of lemons.
This comment was in addition to my first one. Anyways what I’m talking about is the ones that are all about talking about every step of the way to it taking up 1/5th or build up and whatever, then it “cuts to dark” the next day or whatever. Those are even worse in my opinion then those that have lemons every few chapter…
1/5th *of it with* build up or whatever
Yes I understand MTL’s aren’t the best for lemons. So I always read the bio. But if there’s a tag, then there shouldn’t be ANY skipped lemons. Just my opinion.
Yeah I agree. I just normally hate seeing any lemon skipped. I feel like details matter in everything. When you describe a fight scene, details are necessary. Same when describing an event, a specific location, a characters background, weapons or items. Details are always used. So why when there’s a romantic scene it gets skipped? Doesn’t make sense to me. Usually it’s just the Author making pathetic excuses like they don’t have experience, or aren’t good at it, or cringe writing it. It’s all bulls*#t. Only way to improve is to practice